Oh now I understand your vision ;-)
yep I watched the clip (are there more? because I only found one on that link ...)
the music over Weylands dialogue is a bit too loud, but the rest flows nicely, good concept!
yeah, I wasn't fond of the medbay scene either, it was too long and showed to much - it is the main problem of Prometheus, as I see it, that the movie skips from SciFi to Splatter, couldn't decide what it wanted to be ...
"The Thing" did a much better job at being SciFi/Splatter!