I'm sure Ady is still working some more on the visuals of this clip, but I just wanted to put on my "critique goggles" and be helpful in finding anything that's worth mentioning and possibly corrected/edited (in case any of these flew under the radar).
Paden said:
One minor thing I noticed in the latest clip released, is that the red graphics you've been adding to the snow speeders control console are missing from a few frames just after Dak is killed (~23").
Yep, you're right.
Monroville said:
should Wedge's snow speeder cast a shadow at 1:28 when he's circling around the legs in the high overhead shot?
You're right too, its shadow should be seen in there. It's shadow is also missing between 1:32 - 1:33 (you'd at least notice it on the AT-AT's legs).
Also the shadow being cast by the snowspeeder is noticeably off between 1:24 - 1:25 when comparing it to the AT-AT's shadow (it's as if the light source is different between these two objects).
I believe the white cores are missing in the lasers at 0:42 (is it because what's seen outside the AT-AT's window will be changed?) and also between 0:58 - 1:00. All of the other lasers look perfect that I can tell.
At 1:45, the AT-AT's back leg (the far right one) has an attachment on the foot that appears to be off and then it suddenly "jumps" to its correct location between frames.
The bend in the AT-AT's legs as its tripping (more noticeably it's rear legs) are different at 1:47 than they are in the subsequent side-view shot. Not sure if it's fixable, but still worth mentioning.
The mountains in the background to the left of the fallen AT-AT (at 1:55) I believe are different than they were previously (at 1:50 for example). I noticed that other areas in several of the backgrounds were fixed though.
I think that is all that's worth mentioning - I hope this was helpful :)
I still can't get over how much I loved all of the little details that were added, no matter how minor, such as the snow being kicked up from the blasts as the speeders are beginning to shoot at the fallen AT-AT ;)