The plot has promise. It's a lotus in the muddy puddle that is your formatting and grammar. You generally know which words to choose, but your flaws render you borderline inarticulate. Some type of dyslexia?
Post #672049
- Author
- Reegar
- Parent topic
- PREQUELS ENVISIONED BY BIG BOSS_92
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/672049/action/topic#672049
- Date created
- 17-Nov-2013, 9:54 PM