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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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16-Nov-2013, 11:48 AM

Awesome video clip Ady, it's amazing how well it's taking shape, thank you! Besides some continuity error fixes, I enjoyed seeing a few additional details that worked to 'enhance' the action, such as some extra snowspeeders flying/crashing in some shots. Needless to say, the AT-STs looked great :) Everything with and around Vader's hologram appeared perfect to me too.

On the audio side of things (when it comes time for working on that more later), it did make perfect sense to change Luke's original "Steady Rogue TWO" to be "THREE" instead, but I'm agreeing with Tack, will his tone on the word "THREE" be edited so it can sound more similar to how he said "TWO" originally? As it is, it doesn't quite fit in, but almost.

Something else that stands out to me as a continuity error is the incorrect engine hum of Wedge's snowspeeder at the instant when you hear Luke say over the radio "I'll cover for you". There it's Luke's lower-pitched engine hum when instead it should be Wedge's higher-pitched engine hum. Just wanted to mention it so it could be checked out :) Btw, I liked the new background better at this part too, but I wonder if the replaced background could possibly be salvaged (so it's not totally lost) and be used somewhere else, like when the soldiers are fleeing the AT-ATs towards the end?

Thank you again Ady :)