@Bingowings

Thank you very much Bingowings. I think that's great.

Now, there's still a problem with the last sentence. When it says: "He is the only one who can induct Anakin into the mysteries of the Dark Side. If Anakin can resist falling to the same evil as his former comanders he may thus achieve peace, save Padme, and bring balance to the force..."

This changes the meaning I wanted to say.I want the chancellor to teach Anaking the Dark Side but with the ability to not becoming evil. In your sentence a reader understansd that Anakin himself must avoy becoming evil and I want to stablish that the chancellor's lessons are the ones who make that.

Can any one help here please?

@daneditor

I'm sorry daneditor, I have no clips, but because of the nature of the project, I don't think they would help at all, since they would look like a trailer of the original movies. It's the overall experience which changes the meaning and tone of the movies.

In any case, the project is almost finished, so if anyone helps me with that last sentence in the crawl, I hope to have the movies ready to watch in a few days.