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Post #669257

Author
Bingowings
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Star Wars ultramachete edit (bit of help needed) (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
4-Nov-2013, 8:05 PM

"Networks"is a really off word in this context (but as English isn't your first language who can blame you for not noticing??).

Here is a quick stab I made. These crawls are still too long though.

Episodes III & IV THE CLONE WARS


It is a perilous time for the Republic. More systems are rallying to the Separatist Confederacy led by Count Dooku. Threatening the system of Naboo with war if they resist joining their cause.

In response, Queen Amidala of Naboo has convinced the Galactic Senate to appoint the Senator of Naboo as the Supreme Chancellor, but his chances to bring about peace are decreasing. Returning to her home world and, escorted by two Jedi Knights, the Queen hopes to liberate her people with aid from the native Gungan army.

Sabotage has forced her ship to land on Tatooine. There, the Jedi have found a slave boy who could be the Chosen One long prophesied to bring balance to the Force. This child will have to risk his life and win a pod race to repair the ship and secure freedom for himself and the galaxy...



Episode V THE REVENGE OF THE SITH


Just as war was drawing to a close, the Jedi have been drawn to the Dark Side of the Force. Their attempts to betray the Republic have been thwarted by Anakin Skywalker, and the Chancellor's life has been spared.

The Jedi now seek to seize power and will not hesitate to kill Padme in order to destroy Anakin. His only chance is to be faithful to the Republic and follow the teachings of the Chancellor.

The Chancellor has revealed himself to be a Lord of the ancient Sith order, pledged to fight corruption and provide strength and stability to the war weary peoples of the galaxy. He is the only one who can induct Anakin into the mysteries of the Dark Side. If Anakin can resist falling to the same evil as his former comrades he may thus achieve peace, save Padme, and bring balance to the Force...