Ok. I'm transforming the 6 movies star wars saga into a five movies saga with a diferent chapter order. Episodes one and two are going to be now a single movie call "Episodes III & IV The Clone Wars", and episode III is now "Episode V The Revenge of the Sith".
I have also made new cralws form them but since English is not my first language I need a bit of help. Someone has helped me but there is a problem with one sentence because the meaning has been changed. here it is:
MINE: Now he is the only one who can teach Anakin the powers of the dark side of the force without falling into their networks of evil, unlike the rest of Jedi, and thus achieve peace, save Padme, and bring balance to the force.
NEW: Now he is the only one who can teach Anakin the powers of the Dark Side. If Anakin can resist falling into their networks of evil, unlike the rest of Jedi, he may thus achieve peace, save Padme, and bring balance to the force...
Now, even if the new text is much better than mine, it changes a bit the meaning of what I wanted to say. In the new text, the chancellor teaches Anakin the dark side and then Anakin must be careful not to become evil, unlike the rest of jedi, and in the old text, the chancellor teaches Anakin the dark side but “with a technique” that saves Anakin becoming evil. So one idea is to write it like this:
Idea: Now he is the only one who can teach Anakin the powers of the Dark Side and how to resist falling into their networks of evil, unlike the rest of Jedi, …
Not sure if this is the best solution and I also don’t know how to finish the last part. Any help please?