NeverarGreat said:

I hope the last post didn't seem too critical; the way you decided to end Boba is really dramatic. Perhaps Vader's gloating over Boba could be made to include information about Boba's personal code, further reinforcing why he would suddenly work for the rebels. I like how Vader knows Boba's thoughts. It would be a blow to the Rebellion if Vader was able to extract from him their location.

Naw, criticism is welcome. Sometimes it has to be blunt, if I'm to learn.

You called the next plot development, by the way. The Rebels stole valuable and exploitable information on the enemy, but this costs them.

Thanks of the comment!