Thank you for the review, NeverarGreat. You are my editor. Clarity and smoother transitions. Got it.
Chapter Seven was without a doubt the weakest. It was at a vague part in the outline. I'm going to return and add that conversation you wrote at a later point.
Boba is risky for me. The story aims to develop a previously undeveloped character, but I'm nervous of giving him too much screen time. I'll go ahead and write the version of Chapter Nine I originally planned, but backed out. It does make sense that Leia would send him to hunt Vader, and the result is something that needs to be seen.
One week anniversary headed our way. Let's go at it with a bang.