You are correct on every count!
I shall pay heed to this critique. Importance of clarity can't be overstated.
Post #666307
- Author
- Reegar
- Parent topic
- The Force Conquers All - [Completed Short Story/ROTJ Reimagining]
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/666307/action/topic#666307
- Date created
- 20-Oct-2013, 2:13 PM