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Post #666304

Author
NeverarGreat
Parent topic
The Force Conquers All - [Completed Short Story/ROTJ Reimagining]
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Date created
20-Oct-2013, 1:57 PM

I'm having some difficulty following who is talking. I originally thought that Luke was in a cave on Tatooine, mentally communing with Yoda, but the moss and the light years make it sound like he is back on Dagobah talking directly to Yoda. I assume that he is also hearing Vader's voice in his head while this is happening.

It's a good start, but would be easier to follow if we were told who was speaking.