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Post #666184

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Tack
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How would you have handled Episode VI (6)?
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19-Oct-2013, 6:10 PM

Here's my attempt at a plot outline, scene by scene.

  • Crawl
  • Vader visiting the Emperor on the city planet (Emperor in the shadow throughout the scene)
  • Luke on Dagobah, carrying out a successful version of the cave scene from ESB
  • Lando, 3P0, and Leia preparing to leave for Jabba's palace
  • 3P0 arriving at the palace gates, unwittingly gives Jabba a holographic message explaining that 3P0 is a gift (from Leia in her Boussh disguise this time)
  • Vader arrives at Death Star II
  • Luke constructing his lightsaber (Vader attempts to get into Luke's head)
  • Yoda's Twilight and discussion with Ben (no Leia sibling)
  • Leia and Chewbacca arrive in the palace, Chewbacce jailed
  • Luke arrives at Tattooine
  • Emperor arrives at Death Star II
  • Leia unfreezes Solo, and the both of them are caught
  • Luke arrives at the palace, and attempts to free them, Jabba sees through disguise and orders Luke and the rest to execution
  • Dune Sea, Han and Luke reconcile, Lando and Han have uneasy relations, Leia kills Jabba
  • All leave on Falcon, inside discussion, exposit rebel gathering
  • Death Star II arrives at Endor (standard class-M planet)
  • Rebel briefing, ( The assignment is different in this version. Endor mission is more espionage, Lando goes with them, Space mission is to be carried out later on, from the planet)
  • Emperor and Vader discuss the plan to turn Luke
  • Shuttle arrives at Endor, Vader once again attempts to get in Luke's head
  • Ground mission (they take out imperial base, discover slave colony)
  • Emperor sends Vader down to Endor
  • Han attempts to train slaves, Lando and Han finally reconcile
  • Night before strike, Luke attempts to converse with Ben, but fails, Vader attempts to attack, but Luke surrenders
  • Leia discovers Luke missing, but Luke informs her he's fine
  • Morning of the strike, Han capitulates Falcon to Lando and Chewie (not a scratch)
  • Mid-Transit discussion between Vader and Luke
  • Final plans are laid out, ships take off. Han and slaves begin to survey area for possible ways of getting to shield generator
  • Air strike begins, Avenger is destroyed
  • Luke is brought before Emperor, temptation begins
  • Ground strike begins, Han is injured
  • Air strike continues, Wedge dies
  • Luke and Emperor, Luke is driven to duel with Vader
  • Leia unsuccessfully attempts to breach shield
  • Air strike, Falcon receives damage
  • Luke and Vader duel, Luke attempts not to fight
  • Leia attempts second break in, R2 is shot (badly)
  • Luke is nearly driven to kill Vader, but stops, Emperor nearly kills Luke
  • Air strike, Executor is brought down
  • Vader kills Emperor, Luke brings a wounded Vader down to shuttle, Vader passes
  • Leia destroys shield
  • Luke makes an announcement to fleet, declares war over
  • Planet celebration, Han berates Lando for damage to Falcon
  • Luke and Ben have discussion on city planet (Ben mentions possible sister)
  • Luke, Leia, and Han share discussion, Leia says they've begun reclaiming power
  • Luke leaves on own to search for sister
  • Credits

 

It could use work, but you get the gist.