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Post #666046

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Davnes007
Parent topic
UK Energy companies Price Hikes and the medias response.
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Date created
18-Oct-2013, 8:12 PM

Ronster said:

If you want to scrutinize spelling and words.

how about this version

UK Energy Companies, Price Hikes and the Media Response

 

....Just leave me alone I am drinking tinny Beer in the dark

There should be a comma after 'Hikes', and you forgot the period at the end.

Also, the use of the word 'the' in your revised version may not be entirely necessary.

 

And....I believe saying "tinny Beer" is redundant.