I haven't read all 14 pages, but here's how I see the original trilogy.
Star Wars is a cool little 70's movie, Empire is a great film that happens to be set in the Star Wars universe, and Jedi is a film of set pieces - the shape of films to come.
I love all three films, and I think they're all really different. Jedi is generally seen as the worst one, and in some ways it is. But the high points are really good. Jabba, the Emperor, speeder bike chase, Luke's confrontation and the attack on the second Death Star (I still haven't seen a better space battle).
A few other things. The shot over Chewie's shoulder as he shoots a speeder bike, Tie Interceptors, Luke deflecting a speeder bike's lasers... that bikini.
What lets it down are things like the scene between Luke and Leia, then Han and Leia. Pretty dead scenes, and Harrison Ford is terrible in this after being so great in Empire. It's like he thought "ok, it's a kids film" and didn't give anything extra. The pacing is awful whereas Empire is brilliantly paced, always pushing forward. Jedi lurches around and settles.
Anyhow, anyone who thinks that those prequels are better than Jedi are smoking crack. Seriously, those are three of the worst films ever made.