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Post #655557

Author
cain spaans
Parent topic
STAR WARS: points of origin - fan documentary (* unfinished project *)
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https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/655557/action/topic#655557
Date created
19-Aug-2013, 11:13 PM

Ryan McAvoy said:

As is said above, take your lumps and bumps and move on, don't let anyone stop you. If it's something you still believe in, go right ahead with your project. But in future if you want your project received with more warmth... instead of making your first post like this:

cain spaans said:

STAR WARS: behind the eye is a new fan documentary that I want to make that will end all the other fan documentary's such as deleted magic building empire and returning to jedi this is one out of three documentary's containing footage from official documentary's deleted scenes and other material

...I'd suggest something more like this...

cain spaans (Could have) said:

'STAR WARS: BEHIND THE EYE' is a new fan documentary that I want to make.

The fantastic work by editors such as Jamie Benning on projects like 'Building empire' and 'Returning To Jedi' has inspired me to do something similar. This edit will be incorporating some of the latest footage not available when those projects were compiled and where possible will be in glorious HD!

This will be the first FanEdit I've attempted so I'd appreciate everyone's advice on what is the best software to use. Also if you can suggest footage and ideas that would be fantastic!

More deatils to follow Star Wars fans!

Sounds better right? Some basic formatting would've hepled for a start, rather than a spew of lowercase words. Either that or hire a PR management team ;-)

I agree with what you say thanks