I enjoy the new opening. Very interesting, and I think it will work very well. I decided to look back a couple of pages to review your whole plot outline. I notice that the rescue on Geonosis will involve "regular" troopers prior to the discovery of clones who will don the same armor. My concern is that visually it might be a little confusing. I suggest that you alter the design of the troopers somehow to make the regulars distinctive from the clones. It doesn't have to be drastic, as it would make sense for them to use established armor, but for the audience, it would be wise to make sure they look noticeably different, even if it isn't anything drastic. Just my thought. In any case, keep up the good work, and know that I really am pleased with the direction of this project.