This is great work so far! Really enjoying watching this. It's strange how natural Star Wars feels as a 1930's-esque black and white film.
In the sake of constructive criticism, here are a few things I noticed.
- For the sake of consistency, the text in the temp. scenes doesn't flicker or have any telecine wobble like the rest of the video.
- The opening logo/crawl should only have one Star Wars logo. I don't remember which one it was in the original/real workprint. Maybe someone here does.
- The Star Wars themes in a bit too loud compared to the surrounding audio. Maybe bring it down about 10-15%.
- I'm not 100% sure, but I think the scene where Luke talks to his friend about him going off to join the Rebellion should come after the scene where he talks to Uncle Owen at dinner, since during that conversation he mentions being stuck there another season.
- This is more personal preference, but some shots, like some of the scenery in the Tuskan Raiders scene where Luke meets Ben, look far too sharp to be a faded workprint.
Can't wait to see the final product!