No Yoda, yay! :)
Aside from some trimmed dialogue and removing Anakin's jump, I'm not exactly sure what else you did to that clip, but it sure seems to play through a lot better.
As for Dooku's death:
MrInsaneA said:
Unless you have Anakin just stare at Dooku after he catches the saber....have them lock eyes....and THEN Anakin cuts Dooku's head off. That would have Anakin being un-manipulated, but still show that he made the wrong decision.
I would like to see this suggestion tried as well. I think seeing the lightsabres at Dooku's throat would visually clarify the scene.