aalenfae said:
Now, to finally deliver... Here's a new clip from RotS! Enjoy! http://vimeo.com/68873911

Nice clip as always.

A couple of thoughts.... I like that it seems that Anakin is halfway down his fall with making his own decision to kill Dooku. I'd leave that.

What i would personally remove his palpy's obviously evil thought process of leaving obi-wan. Just way too obvious. I would consider cutting that line and cutting straight to a shot of Anakin carrying Obi-wan. I don't even think you have to show him going to Obi-Wan to remove him from underneath the fallen platform. Maybe that helps you lose the falling platform all together?