The death of the major character should be made more obvious by preceding the gunshot with the light from a laser scope on the character's forehead--and after the fact, maybe cut to a celebration scene (maybe the end celebration from either Episode I or VI).
Post #646387
- Author
- RicOlie_2
- Parent topic
- Episode III: Revenge of the Ridiculousness
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/646387/action/topic#646387
- Date created
- 21-Jun-2013, 12:02 AM