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Post #646387

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RicOlie_2
Parent topic
Episode III: Revenge of the Ridiculousness
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Date created
21-Jun-2013, 12:02 AM

The death of the major character should be made more obvious by preceding the gunshot with the light from a laser scope on the character's forehead--and after the fact, maybe cut to a celebration scene (maybe the end celebration from either Episode I or VI).