Thanks for the feedback.

I really like both those ideas. The shot of Fett falling is terrible so this would be a nice workaround. I'd probably also show his body dead on the ground as I like that shot, but it's definitely something worth playing around with.

Jabba's dialogue is mostly from my "Dan Edit" from a couple of years ago, and for some reason I kept trying to make Jabba funny - but I think I prefer your reunion line. The dialogue in there is intended to convey that Jabba knew it was Leia all along, but it clearly wasn't effective.

And feel free to give out copies to anyone you want.