Ok I Watched it... And I enjoyed it.

I do have some points I would like to raise.

1. You Changed the order so Chewie get's delivered to Jabbas palace earlier but then cut the conversation with C3PO and R2 regarding "poor chewbacca and Lando never returned from this awful place" It felt like you did that to make the dialogue fit and then cut the dialogue?

2. Missed Lapti-Nek yeah it's sleazy but that is how it should be

3. Because droid torture got cut (yeah I understand) it felt weird C3PO was talking on behalf of Jabba

4. I Really liked the second conversation that Vader had with Luke telepathically very well done... Amazing what music can do

5. I like the opening you have but I think it would be better if you cut the emperor saying "my friend" for no reason when it feels like the conversation has already ended

6.I Loved the Ties Launching during the Battle... This was great moment

7.Bobba Fett plot although I think you did the best you could possibly do with it and I think you did a great job of showing how you would like to see the story progress, I kind of felt that it dragged it down a bit... But It's obviously not your fault If it were Proper footage this would actually work a lot better... Although I still think he should just bite the dust in the sarlaac but done better so you did not manage to change my mind on that unfortunatley.

8.Really liked what you did with Jejerrod looking at the video screen.. But I also think you over did it a bit here... I would suggest reeling this in a bit.. But I did enjoy it how it was done so no bad thing.

9. The Luke / Leia brother sister plot got a bit lost and I felt that this was something missing from the drama.

Thanks for your hard work and overall well done... The Pacing is much better than some other edits on Jedi I have seen that cut Large Clumps out and butcher it... You have done well in this regard but Jabbas Palace has been carved up a bit.... but not butchered so well done