I liked it that you cut the Ben scene entirely. There is too much reiteration and not enough new information (the same is applicable to the Yoda scene and I appreciated the trims there as well)

I never minded the Luke/Leia brother/sister thing. In my opinion you set it up very nicely for the "there is another line" from TESB to be resolved and explained during the saber fight at the end; instead of Yoda or Ben giving this revelation to Luke it could be played out as a simultaneous event for both father and brother.

Just my two cents.

I really like your edit and hope that you don't abandon finessing it In all honesty I find it a preferable watch to the original product (and it's various GL fanedits).