Expanded Hoth

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There a video clip above... This is not visual enhancement but an effort to try to expand hoth Battle in a few places theres a change list below.

1. Alternate shot (removed Bad POV and Luke saying I'll cover you to wedge) =increases pace and definiate improvement

2. Ion Canon shoots Again = is ok

3. Stormtroopers enter the base earlier = is ok

4. "Crude" but Vader Lands on Lambda needs Roto shuttle troops disembark AT-AT's The AT-AT foot ideally would be combined with Vader leaving the shuttle = Needs work not so good

What I could not do is having Vader Kill a Rebel via lightsabre when he enters the base... Credit to ALanfae Vader having lightsabre brandished when entering the base I think is the way to go and would like to see a kill just to make Vader extremely scary... Although not graphic Music cues may make this impossible the only place would be straight after bursting through the wall scene I feel.

This is not so much about wether it works although I have done it in rough it's more about what I would like to see or how it could be possibly expanded.

Another thought I had regarding If Verrs got Kamikazed as originally intended would it be better to have a new AT-AT destruction for the one Luke destroys and use the existing one for Veers demise as the snowspeeder is meant to fly directly into the head... Just an Idea

Anyway hope you enjoy the take