Ronster said:

I'd say that is a lot better now

just a thought but after watching it a few times I think it might be better to cut it back on Vaders last line to "inform me when we are in super lasser range" and leave it at that.

It's more blunt and Vader should not be entertaining the idea he will fail can you chop that in your editor as I think it will improve it further. And then I think it is done

but If you wan't to keep it fine It's just where I can see perhaps further improvement

I wanna keep it, for two reasons.

1. Mainly because there would be a big empty silence at the end as you watch the actors walk away. This would be fine (Even an improvement) if I cut the end of the scene tighter but with this being an "All the material" workprint I don't want to trim out this unique snippet of footage.

2. But also because, I really like having a 2nd reference to the Emperor in SW (After Tarkin's mention of him disolving the senate) especially as it identifies Vader's relationship to Palpatine. Then it's already established going into ESB which is nice if you're watching the OT trilogy. Plus it's nice to keep Palpatine more involved if you're watching a PT into OT marathon!