Ryan McAvoy said:

Thanks to daneditor's suggestion to use dialogue from 'Star Wars: The Interactive Boardgame' and darth_ender's kind uploading of said game. I've been able to create new dialogue for Vader that is unique to this scene instead of re-hashing lines from elsewhere in the OT. Thought I'd show it in colour as you can already see how the BW version looks anyway, on my Vimeo channel.

The Vader scene works really well with the new dialogue! Great work. The only thing I'd suggest is maybe reduce the volume of Vader's last line as he walks away, just slightly.