Bingowings said:
Please don't mistake my lack of comment as a lack interest.
I'm fascinated to see how this plays out.
It might be fun (coming from the conversation over on the Star Wars discussion thread) if you attempted to remove the suggestion of Force powers being inherited from the edit.
The lines that would need to go would be Ben saying that The Emperor and Ben knew that Vader's offspring would be a threat to him and Luke saying that Leia has the same power that he has and will learn it.
How is she supposed to learn it if Yoda and Ben are gone and he, Vader and the Emperor are dead as he claims to expect on The Death Star.
It would be nice to watch Jedi with the impression that anyone could become a Jedi and fight Vader rather than a prince born with magic powers.
Those two lines have already been cut, although not for that specific reason. Luke and Leia aren't related in this edit so the Ben/Luke scene has been cut altogether and the other scene was trimmed to remove those lines.
It's an interesting idea but surely Luke becoming a strong Jedi already suggests that Force powers are inherited?