Oh, mann... where should I start?
Every SW OT fan should take a look on this work of yours. Seriously.
Firstly, before seing it I thought it's some sort of experimental rough cut with a few scenes put in a certain new order. Instead - it's a very smooth watch with nice transitions and music/sound alterations which is not easy to do. You didn't only change a compelte feel of that movie, but you also took a great care in your newly constructed pacing even by shortening the good scenes just for the pace' sake (f.e. shorter approaching of objects and shorter dramatically unconsistent/unusable dialogs). I couldn't believe how convincing it is this way. In this case, less is really more. Of course, there are single details which need reconsidering or redoing, but this is, without being immodest, the greatest fan edit of ROTJ since. I wonder what Adywan will say upon seeing it. It seems, you sent ROTJ to a fitness programm. It lost all the fat and gained real muscle. Incredible. The whole Bobba Fett subplot fits in nicely in the rest of the story and for the first time gives some sense to his appearence in the movie. This is correct way to approach screenwriting.
Unfortunately, we can only see what we can see. I can see a great effort and get very clear idea what ROTJ could have been if Gary Kurtz stayed around, or Lucas have listened for Lawence Kasdan's idea that someone should die in this movie.
Of course, I see that it's almost impossible to integrate all new scenes completely, for a different reasons. Recovered ones look raw and in weak resolution and colour, and the new Endor scenes look directed by another person then the rest of a movie, also shot in the wrong place. This is of course the question of budget, but I suppose, one could eventually shoot this stuff in a "filmy" way with that warm Marquand/Hume picture in Redwoods CA for identical background. The good stuff is, Redwoods is still there - it's not Coruscant or Mos Eisley :-)
The opening of this movie should be bigger in any way (for example one extended Vader's arrival to Corruscant) and the Yoda scene should come second, in one piece. Your remarks about it are right, but they don't help you if something feels missing or weird.
But let me state clearly about this edit: it is extremely difficult to mess with ROTJ and anyone who tries this so successfully as you did should be awarded highest attention of the fan community.
I hope, Kennedy and Abrams and the great creator himself will see it as well just to reconsider the approach to the general tone of star wars films as they maybe should feel like.
Thank you for doing this.