Beautifully edited and lovely music (I genuinely got quite emotional) but sadly it doesn't solve or explain any of the moral problems I highlighted.
Although I found this brief clip emotional, if it was sitting in the context of ROTS. I would just be too busy thinking WTF?! That makes no sense?! to derive any enjoyment from it.
That's the easy part solved. Now a faneditor needs to find a way to explain why Padme has abandoned Luke?