Leonardo said:

Glad I could be of help. I was interested in seeing this.
I noticed the SE Lucasfilm Logo under the old one during the fade out, you might wanna cover it with a black matte or something. Same thing for "A long time ago". I know you're just using the SE for the audio, just take out the video part or disable it. What software are you using to edit this?

Suggestion: the shot of the escape pod falling towards Tatooine could be replaced by a shot from "2001 A Space Odyssey". The framing seems very familiar.

I think the old woman (besides the voice acting*) could be intercut with footage of the speeder, like this:

footage of the woman walking, before turning around (there's roughly 4 seconds you can use)

brief cut to the speeder

footage of the woman reacting

*I'm currently listening to clips from the GTA games, maybe one of the pedestrians has a quote you can use.

Yes I'm aware of the SE Lucasfilm logo bleed through. Gonna fix that.

What shot is it from 2001? Quote me a time. Got it!

Problem with intercutting the anchorhead woman with the speeder is that the speeder footage isn't from anchorhead. Maybe if I could use a mos esiley approach shot instead that would intercut better.

Also need to get higher res shot of the teaser SW logo.

Thx for the feedback.