Glad I could be of help. I was interested in seeing this.
I noticed the SE Lucasfilm Logo under the old one during the fade out, you might wanna cover it with a black matte or something. Same thing for "A long time ago". I know you're just using the SE for the audio, just take out the video part or disable it. What software are you using to edit this?

Suggestion: the shot of the escape pod falling towards Tatooine could be replaced by a shot from "2001 A Space Odyssey". The framing seems very familiar.

I think the old woman (besides the voice acting*) could be intercut with footage of the speeder, like this:

footage of the woman walking, before turning around (there's roughly 4 seconds you can use)
brief cut to the speeder
footage of the woman reacting

*I'm currently listening to clips from the GTA games, maybe one of the pedestrians has a quote you can use.