I hopscotched around the workprint last night, mostly trying to hunt out the large changes.

I think it is really impressive and enjoyed what I saw a lot and would certainly like to see where you take this.

I was quite impressed with how you addressed the Endor battle (ground theater). I always imagined the cut scene on the Death Star focused on the space battle and I like how it was tied in with the fanfilm work of stormtroopers vs. rebels. I've heard other people opine about having Boba Fett vs Han worked in here and how you did this was quite engaging. I realize that based on your source material you're probably stuck there with the burned in captions (and Boba Fett using the word "closure" doesn't work) and the actor in the Fett costume...that costume doesn't fit, again, beyond your control.

My only true concern here is the scenes with Boba Fett on Endor. They work pretty well but all the really tight shots on Fett's helmet doesn't work for me at all. Again, I know that you are shackled by the material that you're working with. If you're trying to make something that could be seamlessly watched with the other five films these shots stand out because none of the movies have facial shots cropped this tight.

I hope that you don't mind my comments. I am really impressed with your work so far and look forward to watching the workprint from start to finish sometime this weekend.