Ryan McAvoy said:

This new cut feels good in terms of pacing and logic but that lightsaber constrution footage is very rough. Needs changing for something else used cause it doesn't fit with the impressive quality of the rest of the sourced material you've sourced.

I don't mind the yoda scene being split into two in principle but two things that would help is if:

1. You cut at some point before or during Yoda walking from right to left

2. Then cut back with yoda in the bed. This will help make the two parts distinctive in terms of composition.

3. subtely recoloured the 2nd half in perhaps more muted/grey/blue hue. This would give it a sombre feel and again seperate it visual, which would help to seperate it in time also.

The footage in the clip I uploaded to vimeo is from here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c0uqWOxsSx4

It's a test only, to give some idea how it will look, and to see if the pacing works.

I'll be recreating the scene myself, as well as cleaning up the deleted scene in Avisynth.