Now this is a bit better. Still I think these things are details and I disagree with most of it.
I mean I like Solo not being serious or scared when they were about to cook him. That's old Solo. I mean if he knew he was going to get killed he sure wasn't going down crying. He was going down in style. As for his rescue, I posted the probable plan in some other thread. It may be very fragile but this is a fantasy after all.
If you don't see any emotional transitions, it doesn't mean there aren't any. Ewoks traps, some props being reused and not seeing bothans before mentioned... I really couldn't care less about details like that. Actually just mentioning stuff without showing it in the film makes the whole film universe seem greater. Just like the "Kessel run" in ANH or "gundrak" in ESB.