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Post #636647

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chyron8472
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Idea: my first steps into a larger world
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29-Apr-2013, 10:28 PM

fairuz hidayat said:


Did the same for the Dooku scene ("Sith are our speciality...My powers have doubled....etc).

Palpy's dialogue in tempting Anakin to kill Dooku was trimmed and done off screen to hopefully give a better impression of Palpy's manipulation and temptation of Anakin.

Yeah, I noticed that.

A lot of other faneditors remove Palpy's goading entirely, but I like the way you did it. It mirrors the Emperor's dialogue in ROTJ, but he comes off neither as arrogant as in ROTJ nor as obviously evil (to Anakin) as in the theatrical ROTS. It works.

 

And yeah--"our speciality" doesn't really fit when the Sith had been in hiding for a thousand years (plus it sounds kinda dumb), and "my powers have doubled" is a terribly delivered line.