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Post #636641

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fairuz hidayat
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Idea: my first steps into a larger world
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Date created
29-Apr-2013, 9:37 PM

chyron8472 said:

Some of the cuts are a bit rough, but I like it.

I liked the way you worked the Palpy dialogue at the end of the Death of Dooku clip.

I also like Obi-Wan being the first voice/face we encounter in ROTS.

Thanks for the comments chyron,

I'll work on the rough cuts during my second run of editing.

For the ROTS Opening Scene, it was an attempt to address the issue of the "nothing there suddenly there's a huge battle" haha. Also wanted to get rid of the buzz droids scene as well as trimming out unnecessary dialogue.

Did the same for the Dooku scene ("Sith are our speciality...My powers have doubled....etc).

Palpy's dialogue in tempting Anakin to kill Dooku was trimmed and done off screen to hopefully give a better impression of Palpy's manipulation and temptation of Anakin.