doubleofive said:

AT-ST shots have been replaced.

Cheers 005 good to know that last shot will be done

I also spotted in the 1st post changelist

89 - Replaced some snowpeeders in background due to bad movement

But I won't assume that means the ones I pointed out...there is one more while troops are retreating but It's passable due to distance and it might be slowing to turn or to cover the retreat so I did not bother to list it

The POV shot is really bad I don't mind if it get's cut... I don't think it really adds anything and it's not in the 1st post either as a confirmed change

This is Wedge's Cockpit and luke is voicing "I will cover for you" over the comms

I woluld suggest something like this but the footage is too low quality

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pALVwzudFC8

some new pov shot and a line from the radio drama. Because the line "I'll cover for you" is repeated before luke crashes so It does not need to be said again and again either. to add to this he also says follow me moments later. So how will he cover Wedge if he is following him and he has lost his rear gunner?

or perhaps an exterior shot and no line at all as it is not needed and to keep the soundtrack intact

Or just cut it.

Anyway just a suggestion and I hope people agree that it looks bad makes no sense at all seems out of scale like he is going to crash into this really big guy or something and does the sequence no justice

Suggestion for a Audio Line from the Radio Dramatization

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2U9XcQlSvGk

07.02 "The Walkers are moving in on the Power gerenrators Luke"

and this could work cutting to a side shot of Luke or a rear of helmet POV (behind a Pilot so we don't know who this is) with the Radio Drama Line next shot being Luke in cockpit facing camera commanding wedge "set your harpoon, follow me on the next pass"