Hi Ryan,

Thanks for sharing your edits!

I checked out your vimeo clips, and the Episode I clip shows a lot of promise. Have you considered re-dubbing all the Gungans in English? Since they play such a large role in the movie, I'd imagine we end up with a lot of subtitles in your edit. On some level, I think TPM needs to stay kid-friendly.

Your Episode III clip retains a little too much Lucas-style humor for my tastes. And all the deleted scenes of them running around the ship just drags the sequence out too much. The part where they discuss what the beeps mean is especially painful.

Just my 2 cents. It sounds like you're done, so I'm not sure how helpful my feedback will be anyway.