Some great ideas in there. I might have written this before, but I'd like to see a way for them all to reach the lowest point and then turn it around simultaneously. Obi is hanging in the pit, the Gungans are chased down and captured (Maybe the droids ask for instructions and it comes back over the coms to execute the insurrectionists), Ani disappeared and the other pilots over the coms think he's dead and that they are being slaughtered and must fall back to the moon to regroup. Above all, the queen is a problem. She has to fall back into great danger. The only thing I know of would be the complicated plan to have the viceroy order the base ship to retransmit video recorded in the throne room to the senate. Staticy images and audio of the queen ordering a stop of the invasion, the viceroy arrogantly refusing and the queen telling him he's still an active threat so she can gun him down, the viceroy telling her that if she does she will lose much support in the senate and maybe doom her planet, shots of some battle droids marching back into the city to recapture the throne room, and Padme angry and about to shoot down the viceroy. The spacebattle, hanging Obi, and about to be executed Gungans could be interspersed throughout the throne room drama. Then Ani blows the base ship and the droids including the ones going back to the palace fall over, and Maul is distracted by his com and Obi slices him. ;/