I applaud the use of models over CGI. Though that crawl could use some work. I had trouble deciphering the last paragraph. I'm curious why the official crawl wasn't used:

Ultimate victory lies within the grasp of

the dreaded Galactic Emperor Palpatine as

the tattered remnants of the Rebel fleet

desperately seek sanctuary and time

to muster new allies.

A grim Luke Skywalker, reeling from Darth

Vader's revelation on the cloud city of Bespin,

ponders his own destiny and that of the Rebel

Alliance. Meanwhile, the search ensues for

Han Solo, captive of the notorious

bounty hunter, Boba Fett.

To deal a final blow to the Rebellion, Palpatine

has hatched a new plan of which even Lord

Vader is unaware. To aid him, the Emperor

has enlisted the services of the vast criminal

underworld that lurks within the

Shadows of the Empire...