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Post #631120

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CP3S
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C3PX's Bioshock 3
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Date created
2-Apr-2013, 6:19 PM

Somewhere lost in the depths for a this forum, probably the Video Games Thread (?), Xhonzi and I talked about what we would like to see in a sequel to Bioshock 2.

I really like the idea of it taking place on an island, following a group of scientists who fled the city of Rapture when they witnessed the foreshadowing of the misuse of plasmids, and realized the likely outcomes of this unchecked power. They took some of the symbiotic sea slugs with them, and settled on a remote island with the intent of continuing research into ADAM.

At one point I got the idea of developing this into a short piece of fiction, then decided I wasn't really into it, wasn't sure where to take the story, and decided to scrap it.

In the interest of sharing what I did come up with, here is what I came up with.

 

Chapter one was going to introduce us to the protagonist and to briefly tell the events leading up to his washing up on the shore of this remote island. 

In chapter two the protagonist was to venture into the jungle and have a run in with giant mutated boars, my idea for a replacement for the Big Daddies of Rapture, as guardians of the ADAM carrying hosts. The protagonist gets torn up by them, and while trying to escape, stumbles on a clearing in the jungle with a fancy looking Victorian style house. The protagonist runs to the house for safety, finds the front door locked, kicks it in, staggers inside, and passes out.

Chapter three, being the only chapter I completed a rough draft of, I will post here.

It is nothing exciting, mostly long pieces of dialogue in desperate need of trimming down.