It's a shame about the comuter-esque filtering [maybe something could be done about that..] but a dream she has about death and what happens after might be a fitting way to end the character - after apparently being crushed by the Alien vessel...Maybe she wakes up later in a post credit sequence. That leaves the door open for the sequel.

Haven't really thought it through but I've been considering the possibility of Janek ejecting the lifeboat with Shaw still inside - which may or may not work. If the end part of the story is going under the knife anyway then there's no reason to not consider radical ideas, I guess.

re: the titles, I like the idea of changing the name, i dislike the idea of copying the style of the Alien main title. I do kind of like the broken / distorted transmission aesthetic and I was inspired to do a little tinkering after browsing this particular website - http://rob-sheridan.com/main.php#/IMAGES/ANALOG%20GLITCH/1/

http://s20.postimage.org/6fhrognd9/LV426_DISTORTED.png

http://s20.postimage.org/ytn78cax9/PROM1.png

These are merely ideas, mucking about in photoshop. Not entirely sure what would work best for the film but it's better to have it's own identity.

The other main idea I've been playing with is doing the whole film in black and white - but i dunno if you'd be interested in going that route.