emanswfan said:
Bingowings said:
One shot that still sticks out for me is this one:
which appears largely unchanged in the sequence as it stands.
If you could possibly add a hint of the interior (you wouldn't see much) it would create a greater impression of scale.
Something like :
Maybe changing the background could also help since currently it's just a blur and screams out minature. Also brightening the dark might help.
Rough Mockup:
I think the background detail is fine, perhaps too blurry, but mostly fine. What feels "weird" about the shot is (again) the perspective. In absolutely every perspective there must be an horizon line where the ground meets the sky (unless it's a space or sky flyby). In that line is where the vanishing point always happens to be.
It could be claimed that the camera is pointing up, or that the shot is taken from a certain height. Unless the camera was in a higher position than the highest point of the mountains of Hoth, the horizon line made of the peaks in the distance should be shown. Question is if the AT-AT is taller than the mountains.
And that's it for the weirdness of the background. However the shot is too short for anyone to notice it.
What sticks out to me is the lack of a cristal with reflections in th cockpit.
I think I might post a mock up soon.