Bingowings said:
One shot that still sticks out for me is this one:
which appears largely unchanged in the sequence as it stands.
If you could possibly add a hint of the interior (you wouldn't see much) it would create a greater impression of scale.
Something like :
Maybe changing the background could also help since currently it's just a blur and screams out minature. Also brightening the dark might help.
Rough Mockup:
