timdiggerm said:

Although I really like the idea, the way it works right now is a little problematic. One establishing shot of the Jedi's ship, and we abruptly cut to a room of characters we've never seen, who talk for a bit, and then right back to that spaceship. If you can move the Palpatine's office scene to a little later, perhaps introducing those characters better, that would help a lot. I do like the idea, though, other than losing Valorum.

Thanks for the feedback. You have a good point there. I did consider inserting the scene later on but couldn't find a suitable spot. I could re-insert the rest of the meeting room scene where Qui-Gon & Obi-Wan mention about the negotiations. That would at least show the link between the two scenes.

Currently working on editing the Obi-Wan vs Maul duel. As with other fan-edits, I'm trying to make Maul's death a bit more believable.