Although I really like the idea, the way it works right now is a little problematic. One establishing shot of the Jedi's ship, and we abruptly cut to a room of characters we've never seen, who talk for a bit, and then right back to that spaceship. If you can move the Palpatine's office scene to a little later, perhaps introducing those characters better, that would help a lot. I do like the idea, though, other than losing Valorum.
Post #624844
- Author
- timdiggerm
- Parent topic
- Idea: my first steps into a larger world
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/624844/action/topic#624844
- Date created
- 1-Mar-2013, 3:45 PM