Greetings,

This is the revised intro to my planned TPM edit. Starting the whole project from scratch. Had problems with the computer and lost all my files.

Anyway, I imported the scene in Palpatine's office from AOTC where he says the line "My negotiations will not fail." I thought it would be a good addition to the opening scene in TPM since Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are on their way to negotiate with the Trade Federation.

Of course, this results in some changes to the film: 1) the Separatists are mentioned in TPM, and 2) Palpatine is already the Supreme Chancellor in TPM.

I'm also working out the possibility of including Dooku's meeting with the Separatist leaders on Geonosis into TPM. This is to have Dooku introduced earlier in the PT rather appearing in the later part of AOTC & getting killed early on in ROTS.