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Post #623686

Author
Bingowings
Parent topic
Star Wars: Bloodlines (New Working Title) (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
22-Feb-2013, 8:14 PM

Maybe instead of monochrome you could use some sort of tint to suggest memory?

The silent thing isn't working for me personally.

Why not just heavily trim the dialogue and extend the spaces between words when possible to create contemplative silences?

Maybe even re-dubbing what is said to some extent.

Half of the stuff said in the PT has zero plot value it could do with some air holes poked through to let the necessary text breath a little.