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Post #620819

Author
ben_danger
Parent topic
Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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Date created
31-Jan-2013, 6:26 PM

aalenfae said:

ben_danger:
That's a unique idea. Though... I feel it wouldn't be profound in the end. It'd be Qui-Gon talking to JarJar, and that's hardly a noble entrance xD, haha.

Yeah I didn't think of that! Maybe his first line could be the "We must warn the Naboo" or some sort of line with "Naboo" removed. Maybe "An Invasion Force! We must warn the Queen"

 

aalenfae said:



Those are fantastic. I like how the white lines don't totally surround the bottom two. You have definitely got the retro edge. My only change would be to widen the gap between OF and THE on the ROTS one. have it match the gaps between the red lines and the words.