aalenfae said:
Sorry for the double-post! Here's the video!
I'm just now getting to see this, so i realize my comments are incredibly late. Overall, this is the best edited opening I've seen of TPM. However, take this as food for thought.
I hate how Sidious is so painfully obviously Palpatine. I would suggest casting all his facial features in shadow. Also, maybe change the pitch of his voice so that is disguised as well.
Other than that, please consider removing all lines pointing out the obvious. "They have shield generators!" "It's an invasion army!" The audience already gets that it's an invasion army because the villain just ordered the invasion, and it looks very much like an invasion army even without the explanation.
However, even if you didn't make those changes this would still be my favorite opening I've seen so far.
Just go ahead and get done so we can watch it all.... Go ahead... Stop reading, and get to work. =)